Some students leave their parents when they go to university but some students live with parents, which do you think is a better practice?
There is a growing argument whether living with parents is much more beneficial for university students or not. I believe that if pupils move away from parents' homes, there are more potential positive consequences on their lives.
There are a couple of remarkable merits to teenagers who live away from their parents. First of all, many students in this situation tend to become more independent because they are required to spend their money more effectively and practically by themselves. For instance, to meet the individual's basic needs such as rent, clothes and food, understanding rational spending patterns are essential to students. Through such practices, many of them can gain more actual economic principles and as a result, might enable to take more responsibilities for their lives financially more than those who stay in parents' property relying on their parents' finance assistance.
Moreover, many experts point out that some youngsters who set off parents are more likely to be satisfied with their independent lifestyle more than their counterparts. This is because they generally do not need to concern about some conflicts with family members often. Hence, their psychological stability can go up considerably. In this case, good academic performance and grads in each exam in colleges can be expected as they are only allowed to focus on their study profoundly.
In conclusion, I am, entirely convinced that there are various benefits for university students living separately from parents more significantly because of encouraging them to become independent substantially and providing them more enjoyable lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51383399209 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00129380986 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3099432614 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257457499728 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102215102032 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542874970519 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157712990049 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367059700222 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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