Every nation has its own greatness. The extent of greatness varies from nation to nation. However, how the greatness of any particular nation can be measured-by means of the welfare of its people or by the achievements of its leaders,scientists,artists,etc? Although there might be different perspectives of different people in order to measure the quality of greatness of a nation, nevertheless, I strongly believe that a single sector alone is not sufficient or even a better indication of how well a nation is.
First of all, in order to have an outlook on the prosperity of a nation, one must obviously look at the regular welfare of its general public. Whether the people are getting proper education, medical treatments, food as well as shelter at affordable cost, healthy means of entertainment or recreation are all basic areas to observe to figure out the well-being of a nation.
However, other sectors play vital role in defining the quality of well-being of a nation. From rulers, artists to scientists and so on are all important figures of a nation. How the leaders of a nation are acting, judging, serving the country are extremely crucial factors which in turn directly affect the happiness of the people of a country. Secondly, the quality of the work of artists can enhance a nation's status too, both at home and globally. In addition, quality work of such figures bring better standard of entertainment to people. On the other hand, no matter how well a nation is doing, it can never develop in terms of quality if its scientists are not performing well and bringing innovation to its people. Science and scientists have always been the very important part of the entire development of the world. Whatever modern era we are living in have been only possible due to the blessing of science and the hard work of scientists. Thus, how the scientists are performing and achieving are vital to be counted on in order to measure a country's well being.
In conclusion, how great a country is doing is actually based on a mixture of factors and not only any particular sector. Both the welfare of the people of a nation as well as the quality work of its special group of people, starting from scientists to leaders all play vital role to represent a nation's greatness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , scientists
...le or by the achievements of its leaders,scientists,artists,etc? Although there might be di...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ements of its leaders,scientists,artists,etc? Although there might be different pers...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...usly look at the regular welfare of its general public. Whether the people are getting proper ...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ty of the work of artists can enhance a nations status too, both at home and globally. ...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...h the welfare of the people of a nation as well as the quality work of its special group o...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ders all play vital role to represent a nations greatness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85677749361 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05791242878 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462915601023 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7102294939 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.705882353 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 5.21951772744 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246852588143 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921731948878 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703883885135 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166584114359 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784045293551 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.