With the modernization of the world, the amount of wilderness area as a whole has decreased at a highly significant level, and is still decreasing .The quantity of wilderness sector present in each nation varies markedly. However, no matter what the size of the wilderness sector is present in a particular country, each country should pass strict laws in order to protect and nurture the whatever remaining areas belonging to wild life is available.
First of all, wild life plays a crucial role in the entire food chain. With the wild life who are the final level consumers being decreased, the middle level of consumers of the food chain would increase. This in turn will increase the demand on the primary consumers, that is, any form of plants, leading to imbalance in the system of food chain. Hence, how the nature runs will get interrupted, which is not going to be a good thing for the Earth.
Moreover, wilderness is not only linked with food chain but also with the other processes of how the life on Earth runs. Political leaders from various parts of the world, as well as different groups of social workers had been seen to raise voice and take different actions to protect tigers. Tigers are one of the wild animals and the initiative to protect them came to limelight because they are linked to the survival of human race indirectly. It is not only the tigers, but the entire wilderness is indirectly linked to the human survival.
In conclusion, it can be said that as the wild life is important for the world, thus it is the duty of each nation to come forward and pass laws, as well as monitor the laws effectively to protect the wild sectors. Otherwise, if not us then our future generations will be facing danger to survive in this once loving Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69009584665 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50433587808 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2086618247 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.21951772744 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119983092114 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411186227998 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395760251425 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697461074205 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413968576298 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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