Many people believe that inherent talent is more important than practice in many fields like sport or music. According to them great musicians and sportsmen are born and can’t be created. However, others claim that talent has little to do with success and any child can be taught to become a great sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion?
Some people are talented and are able to excel on certain things since the day they were born and usually people believes it so. While others uncommonly believes that anyone can be anything they want to be as long as they are taught to do certain things. These 2 contradicting views will be discussed in further details.
Commonly people believes that a person does not earn a talent, but rather they were born with it. People like Lionel Messi or Lebron James does not need to work hard to get their skills because they already have those skills from the beggining. While people that are not good in football or basketball, no matter how hard they try they would not be as good as the world class players
To the contrary, others claim that every single person can be whatever they want to be as long as they work hard enough to achieve it. Those people think that everyone has the same right and fight, it does not matter who you are because everyone started from scratch and they work hard to become what they are now. If you think it is impossible to be as good as Lionel Messi, well that means you have not work hard enough yet because you choose who you want to be.
According to my opinion, i do not 100% agree on either of this views. Even if you are the most talented person on earth but you are very lazy and docile, you would not be anything spectacular in life. Furthermore, even if you work as hard as you can but if it is not your field of expertise you would not be as good as the person that is both hard working and talented. In conclusion, talents do matter but your efforts and your diligence matters more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36721311475 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15049477754 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472131147541 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3906569051 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161062034418 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746672314317 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464302543421 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112976104356 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038539770694 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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