Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the keyboard that I recently purchased from your company. The alphabet I key seems to be jammed.
Let me explain the situation in detail. The alphabet I key being jammed, I need to use the online keyboard while typing. This causes hindrance in my work as I is the most commonly used key. It slows down my typing which affects my work. This is a major problem when I am drafting emails in a hurry. Many a times this causes mistakes. It has also led to a wrong information being conveyed.
Would you please replace my keyboard with a new one or repair the current keyboard. I do not mind any of the two as long as it fixes the issue. Could you also please provide me a temporary keyboard during that time so as to not hamper my work.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours Sincerely,
Fiona D'souza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...n I am drafting emails in a hurry. Many a times this causes mistakes. It has also led t...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e a temporary keyboard during that time so as to not hamper my work. I look forward t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44311377246 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43454231978 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3704190597 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.0 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9285714286 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194144502824 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573489092419 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417564083101 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107705437539 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222913980797 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.