You feel the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting.
Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter:
Explain why you do not like the current programs
Describe what kind of programs you would like to see instead
Explain why these programs are better
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my grievances regarding the programs televised by your station. Nowadays serials promote a lot of violence and glorifies abusive behaviors. In addition, even though issues like suicide and depression is serious, yet they are are not tackled properly and characters are instead portrayed as mad.
Let me explain some of the programs I feel will be beneficial to society. Firstly, you can telecast Ted talks as it will give a ray of hope to people who have had or are in similar situations. Secondly, shows about animals can be aired, particularly in the evening when the children are home so that they gain better understanding and become more sensitive towards nature. Lastly, relaxing music shows in the night will help people to unwind and relax.
In my opinion, television has a large consumer base, and if the right shows are televised it can influence the society as a whole. Furthermore, informational programs helps in intellectual development and makes the audience more aware of their surroundings.
I look forward to your reply and hope you consider the situation favorably
Yours sincerely,
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...ide and depression is serious, yet they are are not tackled properly and characters are...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ead portrayed as mad. Let me explain some of the programs I feel will be beneficial to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, i feel, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14507772021 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85560395461 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699481865285 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.767209219 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 4.34317383033 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220031121144 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069219507601 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602650592114 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115859579702 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387471742699 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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