Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
It is said that money makes the world go round. We spend the majority of our waking hours at
work - earning a living, providing for our families and saving for our retirement. Although
money no doubt plays a critical role in determining the quality and nature of our lifestyle, in my
opinion, the size of one’s paycheque is not a measure of one’s success in life. The basis of my
views are philosophical, social and personal.
Philosophically, success can be defined in myriad ways. For some, success is an external concept
to be measured in terms of high income, huge bank balances, fancy cars, expensive mansions,
luxurious holidays and so on. However, in my view, success is a reflection of internal human
qualities, such as compassion, kindness, honesty, understanding and more. By this definition, the
mere fact of earning a high income does not determine or define success.
Socially, success depends on how we treat other human beings. Do we regard others with respect
or do we impose our will on them? Are we mindful of their needs and desires or do we behave
selfishly? Do we encourage and support our friends, family and communities or do we insist they
only follow the path we think best? It is clear that a critical aspect of success lies in the answers
to such questions for they reveal the quality of relationships we share with our fellow human
beings.
Personally, success can only be self-defined. My idea of success may not be the same as another
person’s vision. This is as it should be. Each of us is a product of diverse social, cultural,
economic, political, religious and ideological influences. When we add to that mix the free will
that each of us exercises, we can understand clearly how each of us fashions his / her own aspirations for what we consider to be success in our own lives.
In conclusion, success is a concept which can be interpreted in a million different ways.Each
individual’s version adds to the richness of our world and makes our planet a more delightful,
amazing and colorful place to live.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-20 | sugussun1994 | 56 | view |
| 2019-07-20 | sugussun1994 | 56 | view |
| 2018-09-05 | cool writer | 11 | view |
| 2014-06-06 | hardeep johal | 75 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 25, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Each
...interpreted in a million different ways.Each individual's version adds to the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96317280453 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96417811784 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56940509915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7536289915 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2105263158 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0699601676086 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242036836872 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323429450237 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0219366656081 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025425538787 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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