Televisions are present in each and every house, nowadays. It has become the inevitable part of many people. Some watch TV for education, some for entertainment, while others for daily news update. Nevertheless, I strongly agree that TV have reduced communication between friends and family members.
First of all, we like to watch TV whenever we have some free time. The primary reason why we do this is that there is no need using our mind power while watching TV. Although we use some brain to comprehend what’s being said, it is usually very low, and most of the human beings prefer doing things which require less effort. As a consequence, we do not spend our free time with family or friends, rather we watch TV. To illustrate this, I remember when I was in 6th grade; I started watching TV a lot, especially those cartoon series. The large conversation between me and parents were converted into short talks. I spent most of the time in my room and came out of it only when I was hungry. But, fortunately, after some time I came to realize that my soft skills are depriving as I was not communicating with anyone for the most part of the day. Since that day I restricted the amount of time I would watch the TV in a day, and also what to watch.
Moreover, shows that are shown on TV are made to attract the audience and to keep them captivated for as long as possible. Lately, series and shows are made with the purpose of attracting a huge audience to earn greater profits. But this is not known to the audience who are watching it. So sometimes we don’t realise how much time have we spent watching that rectangular box which rarely gives useful information. Consequently, we detach ourselves from social life and communication reduces. For example, comedy shows have now become commonplace. Whereas, twenty years ago they were quite rare as were less appreciated at that time. However, as life became more stressful for people with time, they increased as people started watching them relax. Thus, the result was family did not share daily life problems with each other, spending time with friends was reduced which are some of the greatest stress-relievers.
For these reasons, I think that TV has reduced the time one spends with his/her family or friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75376884422 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64977595149 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6942067211 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2608695652 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3043478261 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890494716095 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281725668195 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331176588247 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573101911404 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156419573749 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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