71)Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
In this world money is the only thing that makes people happy. Some people prefer to work for longer hours with high pay and others prefer to work for lower pay to spend more time with family and friends. This opinion really depends on the circumstance and interest of an individual. In my view i would prefer to work for less pay and spend more time with family and friends.
First of all, spending more time with family builds the close relationship and have fun in life. Nowadays, people prefer nuclear family, so kids want their parents to spend more time with them. Whereas, in traditional fa...
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Sentence: In short, everyone dream to be independent and earn more money but each and every happiness, joy spent with families and friends can not be bought by money.
Description: The fragment everyone dream to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace dream with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.429 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 460 350
No. of Characters: 2096 1500
No. of Different Words: 226 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.631 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.557 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.256 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.372 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.536 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.476 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5