There has been debate on keeping old friend rather making new friends.Many people are agree with the statement and some are not.I feel its better to keep old friend due to some reasons which i will explore in following paragraph.
As we all know that there is one famous proverb "Old Is Gold".This statement means there is more value of old things than new ones.We can see these days many people makes new friend and they forget their old friends.Due to level of education,work and universities many of them are being separated and are compelled to make new friends.Due to business they are not able to make intimacy among their old friends as a result it slowly decrease their relationship and even they may forget each others.But i feel that ignoring our business,work and study we must keep good relationship with our old friends.Old friends are close to us so that we can exchance any problem and difficulties with them.After knowing our problem they cant stay clam they are always ready to help us which may not do by the new friends.Old friends are friendly with our family background and status but it take long time to know for new friends.We are frank with our old friends but we feel hesitate to do something infront of new friends.New friends may treat us differently when they are well known about family condition and problems but old friends are always ready to support us .
These are some of my opinions towards the topic and i feel it is better to keep our old friends in our life.Old friends are supportive and helpful and are happy with our achievement and always care and loves us.So it is better to keep old friends with regular contact than to make new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72053872054 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6247875117 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508417508418 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 20.1344086022 492% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 427.63094161 48.9658058833 873% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 467.333333333 100.406767564 465% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.0 20.6045352989 480% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 5.45110844103 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317383907483 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251216352975 0.076458572812 329% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0130341783373 0.0737576698707 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251216352975 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130341783373 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.3 11.7677419355 427% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 58.1214874552 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.5 10.1575268817 389% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.28 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.01818996416 138% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.6 10.0537634409 414% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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