The writing passage is all about cane toad a huge amphibian.According to the passage due to rapid growth of toad's population other small native spices are being in trouble and for controlling writers has stated some preventive measure but as per the speaker the passage is in accurate when compared with the lecture.
First,writer has provide suggestion to build fence so that its eggs can't flow to other areas.In previous days also fence has created for rabbits and others animals which had harmful effect on ecosystem.But speakers has contradicted the point as creating fence is not the solution because toads eggs may pass through stream and and rivers to some point and it flowing water may pass the eggs to other places.
Second,it has shown that toads can be easily captured and can destroy by the expert volunteers.But if the untrained volunteers involve then they may destroy the native frogs as well which may harm in ecosystem.This is another part where contradicted theory experience.
Third,writer has suggested to use virus to some extent so that it can controll the rapid population of toads species but speaker argues that it is not the good way to controll because once the virus affect the species it would destroy the habitat and it hamper for longer period and there will be ecological disasters.This directly contradicts the passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...is all about cane toad a huge amphibian.According to the passage due to rapid growth of t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , writer
...when compared with the lecture. First,writer has provide suggestion to build fence s...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...d with the lecture. First,writer has provide suggestion to build fence so that its e...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...gestion to build fence so that its eggs cant flow to other areas.In previous days al...
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Suggestion: In
... that its eggs cant flow to other areas.In previous days also fence has created fo...
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Suggestion: But
...s which had harmful effect on ecosystem.But speakers has contradicted the point as ...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ause toads eggs may pass through stream and and rivers to some point and it flowing wat...
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Suggestion: , it
...pass the eggs to other places. Second,it has shown that toads can be easily capt...
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Suggestion: But
...nd can destroy by the expert volunteers.But if the untrained volunteers involve the...
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Suggestion: This
...ogs as well which may harm in ecosystem.This is another part where contradicted theo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , writer
...contradicted theory experience. Third,writer has suggested to use virus to some exte...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hampers'?
Suggestion: hampers
...ies it would destroy the habitat and it hamper for longer period and there will be eco...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... and there will be ecological disasters.This directly contradicts the passage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08482142857 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84321030986 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 21.2450331126 264% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1437923897 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 284.75 110.228320801 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 21.698381199 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06452816374 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30199767303 0.272083759551 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177976454438 0.0996497079465 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526377532411 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177976454438 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526377532411 0.0443174109184 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 13.3589403974 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 53.8541721854 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.0289183223 218% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.42419426049 126% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.7273730684 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.498013245 232% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.2008830022 214% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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