In this modern era, Healthy lifestyle is very important for every individual life. it is good way to show our status in society. some people think it is government responsibility to become a good Healthy lifestyle of the nation. however, some believe that it's up to individuals to ensure a healthy lifestyle.there are many ways which I discuss to in this essay and give my opinion.
To begin with, people who think that it is the government responsibility to ensure a country has healthy lifestyle in various ways. one and foremost way is government should provide a job to every person. however, if every individual have job with good salary so it's easy to become a good lifestyle in personal life. because, without any job it's difficult for human to survive in this expensive Era. moreover, government should decrease the inflation as a result, the goods are available on lowest price then every person can afford a healthy foods and their diet, which is help them in their good lifestyle.
- The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 73
- Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree? 56
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons 85
- Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time Discuss both views and give your opinion 66
- Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle, others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86470588235 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79079678816 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1409541982 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300902334043 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124354627365 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699456918995 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252428469791 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353772204357 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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