Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, some people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss, both sides and give your option.
It is thought by some people that it is important to complete university education in order to get a good job, whereas some people think that it is essential to gain experience and develop soft skills. In my opinion, academic qualification is crucial to secure a decent job.
One the one hand, all the top most companies has a certain eligibility criteria according to qualification. In other words, one with the highest degree has a edge over other candidates and probability to get selected is high. In India, for instance, all the companies require a university degree and it is pre-specified at their career page. Furthermore, university education helps an individual to master a major subject which helps an individual to perform the job in effective manner.
On the other hand, experience and soft skills increase weightage of the resume. An experienced person can take decisions more effectively and also knows how to manage people. Soft skills helps an individual to interact harmoniously with other people. Another reason, is that they have practical knowledge which they have gained from their past experience, it enables a company to make timely strategies which contributes to the organizational goal.
In conclusion, the basic parameter to get a good job is university education nowadays, as companies shortlist candidates according to education and experience and soft skills are considered at a later stage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... words, one with the highest degree has a edge over other candidates and probabil...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ledge which they have gained from their past experience, it enables a company to make timely st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28070175439 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07233007101 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4082336632 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.454545455 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319774069138 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114156310155 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133948900289 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209423225144 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123244084308 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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