In this sophisticated world, environmental issue is being a daunting problem amid this fast pace society. Mean while, some people presumes that it is not their own problem, others will take the appropriate action but the present condition is completely contrary to their thoughts and the reasons are summarized below.
First and foremost, comfort and apathy are the pivotal reason which trigger people to think like they are living a calm and pleasant full life and they are not responsible for this society, they will be responsible for their family members. This trajectory lead to people to live solitary life and also reduce the concern on this society and environmental. But, they do not know, they are the reason why the environmental is getting worse, and it will affect people directly through the daily usages from the individual like bus, car, other wastage and so on, likewise without their knowledge, they also take part to deteriorate the ecological. Further more, they say the factory wastage and other chemical reaction are the vital reason to the pollution, certainly, but, those are all running for replete the masses requirements. Therefore, people can not deny this fact.
On the other hand, in terms of diminishing environmental pollution, it requires both people and country’s contribution, who are the major part of this world, and if they follow the rules and regulation obtained by the nature without hesitation can mitigate this issue substantially. Moreover, if the Government ordered to stop the use of plastic or other malicious product, then the people should obey and co-operate with them to make and maintain successful relationship for battling against the problems. For instance the developed countries like America and Japan are successfully imitating their environmental rules along with the contribution of people.
To sum up this, it seems to me that the people should realize what is happening in their surrounding, and if masses incorporate them with the Government to adherence the rules and regulation, can tackle any pollution issue in impending years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...ng problem amid this fast pace society. Mean while, some people presumes that it is not th...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stopping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: stopping
...ly. Moreover, if the Government ordered to stop the use of plastic or other malicious p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29552238806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88609945431 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564179104478 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1716493068 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.272727273 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912595423588 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367169667826 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346411730433 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596345762137 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379658977789 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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