Being one of the most proliferated known psychic issues of modern societies, anxiety is a topical debate in numerous scientific gatherings. Some specialists subscribe to the belief that pausing any productive activity for a while during a day, is of paramount importance to remedy this situation. I, for one, opine that this approach, although plausible, may not be beneficial for everybody.
Admittedly, it is correct to assum that in many cases what leads to stress is being overly obsessed with one’s occupation and duties. Thus, occasionally taking a break from those may mend the sufferer’s mind and body. Not only this approach has proven to be of use in many cases, but also there is an essay written bu Bertrand Russell, one of the most distinguished sociologists of the 19th century, arguing that this methode may even increase an individual's capacity during work-hours.
On the other hand, this is not to be prescribed for everybody due to the diversity which reigns the society. Ignoring people's divergences is an utter mistake when it comes to facing psychological disorders. In some cases, doing absolutely nothing fruitful is what aggravates anxiety issue, taking it to more complicated levels. In this case, numerous studies have stated that perfectionists feel the urge to do something productive even during their leisure time, otherwise they may experience guilt and unease. So for this fraction of population we may seek other solutions. It is also worth noting that doing nothing puts a person behind his schedule piling his tasks,resulting in even more mental pessure and anxiousness when coming back to chores.
To recapitulate, personally I believe an occasional pause of all preoccupations during the day, may be a plausible cure to stress for certain people, while insisting that in another group this may trigger even more sever types of anxiety. As a result, I think of this approach as a partly effective one and not applicable to the whole society.
- This chart below shows the percentage of the city's population that does not have any sort of health insurance. there is information from 1981 to 2005 for two cities 78
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (high acid levels are measured by low pH values).Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health. 78
- Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places.What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations? 89
- Once children start school, the teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... that this methode may even increase an individuals capacity during work-hours. On the ot...
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Line 4, column 670, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , resulting
...son behind his schedule piling his tasks,resulting in even more mental pessure and anxious...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, while, i think, as a result, in many cases, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19565217391 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99910773352 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.462602758 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840401442645 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030505261447 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433861726332 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475973300771 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366596105944 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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