The reading and lecture both discuss if the bees exist on the earth 200 million years ago or not. While the reading states that this nest could not be related to the bees from 200 million years, the professor refutes, saying none of these claims are convincing.
Firstly, the reading states that we could not find any fossil back to 200 millions years. In fact the fossil that we found back only 100 years. However, the professor argues this notion by saying that the trees that found in Arizona might be could not have the sticky materials that preserve the bees. As a result, the bee nest did not found in that trees. So, it does not mean that there is no bees' nest exist since 200 million years ago.
In addition, the article avers that they could not find flowering plants in that area. Moreover, the flowering and bees should be too close. On the other hand, the professor refutes this idea by explaining that the flowering plants could be existed on earth later on. So, many bees were eating other plants like pine tree. Furthermore, after the flowering plants existance on earth, the bees adapted to feed on them.
Lastly, the article mentions that the fossils that found in Arizona missing many important characters of bees. Such as, these fossils missed the nest caps. Nevertheless, the professor questions this idea by pointing out that there were many chemical evidance to support that these fossils are related to the bees. the chemical analysis of the fossils ensure the presence of water that used by the modern bees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no bees'?
Suggestion: there are no bees
...n that trees. So, it does not mean that there is no bees nest exist since 200 million years ago....
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... these fossils are related to the bees. the chemical analysis of the fossils ensure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15596420803 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496268656716 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1444110421 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5625 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867152912793 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321329104658 0.0996497079465 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239488655101 0.0662205650399 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547767647135 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233182413276 0.0443174109184 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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