Many people thinks that it is more beneficial to travel alone for learning a nation culture and experience but some individuals prefer to travel in company of their friends or some known. This essay will explain both perceptions and i will felicidades my perspective also.
First and the foremost, travelling makes individuals more intelligent and independent if they are travel alone. For insurance, when a person is loving without any companiyon than that person is able to grasp many things by their self like culture of that place and experience the values of particular traditional way, the people adapted. Moreover, it is an advantage for person to explore the whole things about the way of living circumstances, more closely and enhance the experience about some particular cultural activities and makes a point independently, how much good or bad that culture is!
On the other side, when we are traveling in company of friends or some closeone, who are of same taste in travelling, gave more adventures tour to discover some culture and tradition because individuals have someone to discuss about the traditions and give opinions regarding that things. They do not need to worry regarding loneliness, in case they are going in different languages country. Furthermore, roaming some nation along with friends are far much better because it gave experience and memories for rest of life about all the small things which was done during cultural tours.
In the nutshell, I would like to tell that nodoubt travelling alone will makes a person independent and intelligent but travelling in close one company makes the tour more memorizable and happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19330855019 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81528755761 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.060912912 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.625 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.625 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200928249703 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878201837985 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665587010905 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130143719353 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398589026818 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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