The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011.Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the gender balance of students who researched under various disciplines in a US university in 2011.

As shown from the information provided, natural science was in the dominant position regarding total number of research students in the US university in 2011, whereby the male and female students were practically identical at 200. Likewise, 200 male researchers studied in Psychology, slightly exceeding their female counterparts. By contrast, Linguistics was the only discipline with more girls, despite the fact that the number of its female researchers was half of that of Natural Science.

In stark contrast, Mathematics, however, witness the greatest disparity between both sexes in 2011. There were 200 male researchers under this discipline, enormously overtaking their female counters, which registered less than 50. In fact, the phenomenon of having doubled male research students were seen in Engineering and Programming too.

Overall, in comparison to female students, male students dominated in most departments in 2011 in terms of quantity.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, regarding, so, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72222222222 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99949825607 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0059065867 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298869459255 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129105092562 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704282675324 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180745131554 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480220159623 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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