What roles should government, companies and individual play to combat climate change ?
The effect of climate change has become more controversial in recent years, although it has a number of drawbacks, which should be well handled. This essay will further elaborate required prominent roles, which will follow by the society and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, the Carbon-dioxide emission has been increasing every day by the industries, which lead to a greenhouse effect, which is harmful to a human as well as the wildlife. An industry should expand their use of renewable energy resources, inventing new technology, which does not cause pollution. The manufacturer should produce a recyclable and eco-friendly product.
On the other hand, the government should establish the climate change guidelines, an educational program for the awareness. In addition, people can prefer a public transportation rather than the private vehicles, which saves our fossil fuel. Moreover, everybody should stop the use of the plastic bags and prefer paper bags. As an example, according to the international research, Japan uses solar, wind and water power. Whereas East Japanese people are living an organic lifestyle.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that it is up to the person, manufacturer, and ministry, how can they want to save our planet from the change in atmosphere. Every person is equally responsible for this trend, each one should work together to develop a clean and pollution free society for the next generation and thus lead to a better future.
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- What roles should government, companies and individual play to combat climate change ? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Japan uses solar, wind and water power. Whereas East Japanese people are living an orga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24380165289 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90073520612 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640495867769 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.69218803 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126735801457 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457622875765 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511108616858 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729665237016 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159943057903 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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