Online shopping these days become more and more popular, people are tend to buy more products online. Although, the consumers often mislead by the pictures and descriptions of products, this will provide various choices in small span of time to the customers. In my opinion, this is one advantageous approach for shopping despite the problems that they will inevitably face.
The greatest benefit of catalogue purchase is, one can pick their products online by comparing with other models which are manufactured by different companies, which in turn is not possible if the customer visits the shop in person. If the customer step in to the shopping in person, they should walk in to all shops to get information like product description, cost and warranty etc. It is time consuming process and sometimes the consumers may not find their desired things. For Instance, I thought of buying my mobile phone in one near by retail store where there they displayed only fewer models with less features. Then I decided to switch electronic purchase, where I found plethora of options and bought it in one good deal. Sometimes online marketers are providing few promotional offers which attracts customers.
There are few disadvantages with offline shopping. Firstly, it is time consuming, one should go to real stores needs to find their required products. Secondly, the attenders are often unaware of the information about features and usage. Thirdly, we cannot compare the product with other choices and offers. Finally, the consumer reviews are not available in real stores, this reviews will flash the idea about the product and its working condition to the customers. For example, sometimes we may buy the things by incurring more budget, so it often much important to get aware of the reviews before moving forward.
To sum up, There are plenty advantages with teleshopping where we can choose our products in single glance and we can complete our full shopping in short span. So, these days most of the people are going for online purchase. Though there are few disadvantages with online shopping these are overshadowed by the advantages of ecommerce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...hought of buying my mobile phone in one near by retail store where there they displayed...
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun features is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e they displayed only fewer models with less features. Then I decided to switch elec...
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Line 6, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e people are going for online purchase. Though there are few disadvantages with online...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in short, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13068181818 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6630458157 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539772727273 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2781700168 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162699364338 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505454706467 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783369170499 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114746218199 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863972887894 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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