You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•explain why you want to take time off work• give details of the amount of time you need• sugges

Submitted by aaaa on Tue, 09/18/2018 - 13:03

Dear bbbb,

I hope that you are fine and actively perform your work. I am aaaa of your computer section. Urgently, my family members are going to conduct the important ceremony. For that, I need at least 3 days and so, at June 12, 13 and 14, i will be absent in this office.

I finished the wave page designing program. However, I can not start the new software design model. For that, another staff is also suitable and can do that work. Thus, the company's activities will not hamper in the absence of me.
I am looking forward the positive response.

Thank you
aaaa

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear bbbb, I hope that you are fine and actively pe...
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... that, I need at least 3 days and so, at June 12, 13 and 14, i will be absent in ...
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... 3 days and so, at June 12, 13 and 14, i will be absent in this office. ...
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...14, i will be absent in this office. I finished the wave page designing progr...
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...oking forward the positive response. Thank you aaaa
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...ive response. Thank you aaaa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, thus, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 7.0 33.7804878049 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 475.0 965.302439024 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 196.424390244 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52380952381 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31457964036 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72380952381 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 143.1 283.868780488 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4420148307 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.5 112.824112599 42% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174686984745 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611712856645 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766080553372 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106527129263 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866538400536 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.2329268293 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.46 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 11.0658536585 45% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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