A tidal waves of migrating people into urban area who are pursuing a betterment in every aspects of life, albeit a myriad difficulties may arise along with it. In this essay I will delve into some of them and also providing solutions that are feasible to be applied by the goverment for overall citizen's alleviation.
First and formost, when juxtaposing urban lifestyle with rural's one, there are a variation of distintive points which could be mentioned. City's traffic encompass with numbers of transportations for daily commuting purpose, for instance: underground train system, skytrain, buses and so on. This affects in a great way as normally people who lives far away from the city are not familiar with this and it takes time to get used to until they can be completely comfortable with. Secondly, moving to a big city means that people need to have their whole life altering to fit in with the new miserable conditions such as: new rental fee but for a much smaller house, car parking fees, ultilities bill which those are apparently lesser in the rural area. Lastly, since everyone is striving for a good life in a big city, people have to fight for a proper job. And since a redundant in the number of employees provided driven the wages, appraisals and perks system in a negative way, city life can now be exhaustive and troublesome whereas people can actually enjoy their lives without mixing everything up.
Of course the goverment has an important role in the notion of creating a better life for everyone, by not only focusing on city investment but also promoting an overall assurance in the quality of life. The construction of schools and hospitals with updated technological system are the necessity to keep people moving away from home to seek a good life.
Overall, there can be both upsides and downsides in both urban and rural lifestyle. However goverment plays a big role in the mission of balancing and timely providing the exigency
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'wave'?
Suggestion: wave
A tidal waves of migrating people into urban area who...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...be applied by the goverment for overall citizens alleviation. First and formost, when...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a great way" with adverb for "great"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...skytrain, buses and so on. This affects in a great way as normally people who lives far away f...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... the wages, appraisals and perks system in a negative way, city life can now be exhaustive and tr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ides in both urban and rural lifestyle. However goverment plays a big role in the missi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89221556886 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67338949023 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601796407186 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9893929166 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337305373309 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1124234418 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652015347027 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178924345596 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683704664089 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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