The propensity of majority people to attain success in their lifetime, to fulfill which they make relevant efforts, and this lays the foundation for the meaning of term success to them. Therefore, every individual cognizes it as per his/her own experiences of the life. Before presenting my opinion on the definition of success, the varied views given by people need to be discussed.
Firstly, some discern success is all about conquering over the fears and accomplishing your goals effectively. As per supporters of this view, while they accomplish their set goals appropriately in a single attempt, provides them pleasure. Though, a greater proportion of parsonages would agree to this; however, some would perhaps argue due to other conceptions about success. Another set of multitudes believe that having possession of wealth is an apropos representation of success. To exemplify, people relegate those who are affluent enough, as a high class which means society perceive it as a success. For such a guild of people, success means the acquisition of vast amounts of money or property, but this significance of success induced could only stay for limited duration.
However, I comprehend the term ‘success’ the outcomes of positive as well as negatives of one’s life. To elaborate on this, success is not only just about achieving what we need, but also about experiencing failure before winning. In addition, one’s reflection of positiveness in the society also stands for success, for example, the founders of the organizations which care about humanity despite any race or color discrimination. Such personalities are rewarded as being successful in the world because they have acquired the attainments by selfless.
To conclude, people hold varied opinions on success at social and personal levels. However, it could be better defined by aftermath one’s upward and downward flows in life.
- Success is something which most people try to achieve. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge. 84
- Some people believe that children’s success in adulthood is related to the way they have been raised by their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples. 67
- Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould only stay for limited duration. To make a difference here, I comprehend th...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s well as negatives of one's life. To elaborate on this, success is not only ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41447368421 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08260017237 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3578553205 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312106932391 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989970210363 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638724985203 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178697149654 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581559539953 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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