It is argued that development of houses should be prioritised than planting new trees. This essay disagrees that construction of new houses should be humans placed before planting new trees. Firstly, this essay will discuss importance of green plants in cities and secondly, essential part of trees and other plants in The Earth.
Undoubtedly development in cities removing trees and other greens behind the cities borders. City centres as well as their surrounding suburbs become full-filed with concrete without presence of any nature, especially trees. This negative trend cause acummulation of exhaust fumes in the cities. Before trees and other plants had been able to clear the air and make suburban life more comfortable. The prime example is Germany, where government plant for each builded house 3 new trees in the cities.
Secondly, it is a generally known that trees play the essential role in human lives. Rain forest are so called "world lungs", where majority of the polluted air is cleared. Without presence of rain forests as well as city's greens, life on The Earth will not be possible. To support that, Greenpeace released the report where is predicted that life on The Earth ended in next 200 years due to the lack of plants to clear and produce the air rich in oxygen.
To sum up, with rapid growing of the population development of new houses is important, however, should not be the priority as protecting and supporting of oxygen for human-being is the priority number one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08835341365 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64620543175 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562248995984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5130424385 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4615384615 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180550824431 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694680383875 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839452015695 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109991760109 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096374365781 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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