Nowadays, technology plays a significant and massive role in human's life and there is, no doubt, modern technologies have changed the way of communication also. In present time impact of technology can be seen in various fields. In my point of view, modern technologies have some merits as well as demerits also.
First and foremost point is that it is the reality of today new innovations made man's life very easy. With the help of these gadgets like computers and cell phones the way of interact with each other has become very fast and easy. In addition, nowadays face to face communication facilities are also available and it gives the experience more real and physical. Furthermore, social media such as WhatsApp and Facebook has also affected the People's connection with each other. With the use of these apps, one can share his thoughts in a few seconds in all around the world. Hence, it is clear that technology has transformed the world into a small village.
However, every coin has two aspects so we cannot deny the drawbacks of technology. In the present time, it became a trend for among the people to share every life experience on the internet and sometimes these types of activities create some problems like the privacy issue. Moreover, technology also plays might role to break up the family relation. For example, nowadays everyone has a mobile and he or she prefer to spend their leisure time on their cell phones rather than their family members and sometimes over Reliance on mobiles might case miss understanding between couples.
In conclusion, after having both the ideas to my knowledge. I would like to assert that it is undoubtedly advanced technology play a major role in every person life but we should not ignore its negative impact also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91029900332 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62143719758 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7709349105 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17463430298 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506431948608 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581794724848 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915031401316 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482260754991 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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