There are millions of jobs in the modern world. But an assumption has happened nowadays that is certain jobs are suitable for men or women only. Like men are physically strong so that they can easily do labor work. Besides women have good communication skill that's they are perfect in certain jobs. I understand specific gender role may be advantageous. Although I believe that the selection of jobs should not be limited by gender preference only.
In the period of the 21st-century, the world is growing rapidly and technology is becoming advanced day by day. But still, it is believed that some work can do only by men such as mining, to carrying heavy stuff because men have more muscles and strong cell. Parallel women are kind-hearted so they are suitable for jobs as nurses, primary teachers and perfect for customer care job because they have the polite and sweet voice.
In contrary, it is not always true that certain jobs are suitable for gender base only. Because there are many instances where men and women are preferred position vice versa.In Israel, every woman compulsory to join the army in her younger age. women have also proven themselves as a good farmer. Similarly, men have also verified themselves as a good doctor and chef. In conclusion, some roles may be suitable for the certain gender, But after a little effort, it can be changed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Besides,
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecific gender role may be advantageous. Although I believe that the selection of jobs sh...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t be limited by gender preference only. In the period of the 21st-century, the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, similarly, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51807694882 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568376068376 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6048194914 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339316990285 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111852547127 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844428443997 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24501650943 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154966397803 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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