Euthanesia, or mercy killing , has been in the new move and more recently. Many people are strongly against such a practice , but there is a growing demand to have it legalized. How far do you agree with euthanasia being legal?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is irrefutable to say that life and death are considered as human choices. Some people consider euthanasia as crime and do not support the notion; however, others argue it being help for those in chronic pain and life support. In my opinion mercy killing can be practiced at situation and this essay will highlight both aspects with reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, bedridden with chronic diseases, in comma from years are expensive and difficult for families as well as hospitals to take care of. Moreover, for people in those situations, removing life support to free them from misery and physical pain are at times referred by doctors as well. To exemplify this, country like Switzerland legalized mercy killing and recently a renowned scientist at the age of 105 opted the system. According to him he had lived his life and at that age with multiple organ failure wanted a happy ending instead of chronic pain.
On the contrary, life is a gift and making it fruitful is the motto of optimist. For them euthanasia is considered as crime and they believe death should be a natural phenomenon and this is the main reason why myriad countries hesitate to implement and support the notion. Being bounded culturally and morally, birth and death are sacred and natural and in Muslim countries, for instance there are strict laws for not using contraceptives and similar harsh laws for suicidal death.
To recapitulate, life is a precious gift and needed to be cared; however, in my opinion although act of killing oneself sound un-humanitarian ,at very difficult situation such as very old age with chronic disease, in comma from long time, or in life support with rare chances of survival mercy death can be opted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95532646048 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63761766752 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9622738939 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.090909091 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166470600685 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638614834323 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432354099107 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109013698716 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287230613234 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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