You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline,
complaining about this situation
saying why it caused you problems
seeking suitable compensation
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the problem caused by your airline.
I had decided to choose your airline after many searches. You guaranteed that it is the best airline, which priority is passengers’ convenience. Unfortunately, on arrival, I understood that my luggage was lost, and I was waiting at the airport, searching for it. I received my luggage on the last day of the trip, which is not reasonable.
On the day of my arrival, my friends had a party, that I could not attend because of the mentioned delay at the airport to find my luggage. Secondly, as it is obvious, I had no suitable clothes for the trip, and I had to buy some clothes that I did not have a plan to buy. Thirdly, all the souvenirs that I had bought for my friends were in the luggage, and I could not give them their gifts during my trip, which was really a shame.
As the problems caused to me was the fault of your airline, I would be so grateful if the half of my airplane ticket money was refunded. As I said, I spend some money on buying clothes that I did not need, causing me not to have enough money for other tasks on the trip.
I look forward to receiving the refund for the inconvenience caused to me.
Yours faithfully,
Negar Davoodi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49572649573 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75215002386 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7442361315 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19163280636 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822705110519 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504785267215 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117387318945 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758697105378 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.