You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
Explain the reason why you decline the offer
Express your gratitude
Explain why you like your current job very much
Dear Mr.Lopez,
I am writing with regard to the position offered me. I would be really happy if I could have cooperation with your company. But unfortunately, I have to decline your offer because of some reasons. First of all, I had to keep current job until the end of project in which I am one of executives. In addition, your offer is a full- time employment. As a result it is impossible to be accepted to do at the same time with current job.
I want to thank you because you have considered me as a skilled and realiable person. The cooperation with your company has always been my dream. I hope that you could understand my situation.
I have found a golden oportunity in my current job as a manager for a global project that I have tried a lot to get, so that I would like to achieve my final goal which is to end the project successfully. If the project is implemented successfully, I will have better resume to apply for overseas companies in the coming future.
Thank you for your understanding in advance.
Yours Sincerely,
Sarah Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lopez
Dear Mr.Lopez, I am writing with regard to the pos...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... your offer is a full- time employment. As a result it is impossible to be accepte...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, in addition, as a result, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55729166667 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83864678704 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1020531094 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3076923077 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235492195446 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929759322497 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606669346493 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162195375085 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800214924615 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.