The big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often argued that it is more benefits to choose a job with high wage even if does not relate to your career. Although, I agree that lucrative job plays a vital role in our expenditure but I think that it will certainly ruin our interest and passion in the desired field.
On the one hand, having a highly paid job means that you have a great source of income. Many people try to save some amount of money from their jobs and invest to start their own small businesses. Furthermore, securing a good job means you are from away from psychological problems as prices of basic necessities are getting higher and higher and inflation is increasing day by day. It is become hard to get a job in this costly era. For example, in Japan 70% robots will take place of humans in the industries and employment opportunities will be reduced.
On the other hand, dependence on these would retrain us from our goal. We indulge in the other field so deeply that we forget to follow our passion and enthusiasm towards our career and do not want to lose the well-settled jobs. For instance, 30% of engineers are doing sales jobs instead of their field work because of high pays. Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and comprises with his conscience, this person won’t enjoy his life.
To recapitulate, I believe that people should focus on that job in which they will able to get their related work and also paid with the handsome amount of salary which makes them happy and motivated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...rom psychological problems as prices of basic necessities are getting higher and higher and infla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56088560886 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46561848624 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4635064035 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124330732897 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435513205914 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029407347902 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721120146021 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215250737651 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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