Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be care about it?
Nowadays most students after the completion of their studies are not able to get a lucrative job related to their field. In my opinion, there are three main reasons including economic instability, lack of theoretical knowledge and low salaries.
To embark with an economic situation of a country is certainly a huge problem to reduce the opportunities for their young people because if a country is facing this pivotal, their financial stability would never be good. Moreover, international companies would reluctant to open their commercial offices and as a result, it certainly become a barrier in the economic progress of that nation. In addition, organizations are being restricted in hiring new staffs due to their financial crises. For this reason, many highly skilled professionals would migrate to other countries for the sake of jobs. For example, around 40% of young engineers from Pakistan immigrated to different places in 2017.
Another factor is having an insufficient knowledge of students in their profession. As many graduates achieved their degrees with tremendous results but they do not have proper practical exposure. In this competitive period, a company always looks to hire a best candidate having diverse knowledge about their field work with hands on experience on the different applications. While, universities and teachers mainly focus on the theoretical studies and management skills which are vital but it cannot be neglected as this ability plays a vital role in the selection criteria of a candidate.
Lastly, most graduate students are not able to earn the good amount of salary in their chosen profession due to their fresh experience level. In this era of inflation, it is very difficult to survive if you do not have a better job. So managing these expenditures, most of the individuals often left their desired profession and try to get a highly paid job. For example, 45% of electronics engineers in all over the world doing the sales jobs instead of their field work for the huge wages.
To recapitulate, job scarcity in many countries are increasing rapidly. In my opinion, economy, background knowledge and payment issues are three overwhelming factors which induce people to remain unemployed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: becomes
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Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26536312849 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92972553663 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572625698324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9003596453 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.882352941 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24688145502 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755998041268 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035407344289 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128640646415 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466017370293 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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