The recommendation of same national curriculum until students enter college is a generalized one and not a fully analyzed. The consideration of each student is not taken and it is blatantly generalized that every student are same during their childhood years.
The requirement of same curriculum until college would have some unfruitful results. As some students must be readily invested mentally for pursuing a career in a particular field, so the subjects which are not necessary with respect to his field shouldn't hinder his growth towards his ultimate goal. As an example, a student with painting talent and also mentally ready that a career can be made from this, shouldn't face the unnecessary difficulties with subjects like 'Science' and 'Mathematics' which doesn't ultimately shape his career. So in this example if the student fails in the aforementioned subject, he will have to re-appear for the examination and waste his time.
There can also be a case that a particular student is not at all interested in the subjects in his childhood. These types of students can benefit with a different type of curriculum, which will structure their formative years. These children might not have the capacity of physical or mental investment in the subjects which they don't want to study. So forcing them for one curriculum would be a hinderance for their search for a career or a field which they like.
There can also be a case that because of this one curriculum till college, students might give up before reaching the college level. The handling of the curriculum might be taking a toll on their interest and might force them to leave the course before even reaching their field of choice in the college. The failures in the subjects not at all linked to their field of choice would be demotivating hence might force them to leave their schooling.
So, the nation should consider each and every child, everybody is different and generalizing their schooling curriculum would have some undesirable effects which would not be fruitful for the future of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04360465116 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75077887343 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473837209302 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4694943469 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208768245562 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892828076731 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843921816224 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133092879961 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787552987525 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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