The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The bar chart given represents the data on ownership of vehicles in China between the years 1987 and 1999.
From the general perspective, it was observed that there was a progressive increase in the trajectory from 1987 to 1999 but a drastic increase was observed between 1993 and 1995.
In the year 1987, only 300 vehicles were present for thousand people. By the beginning of 1991, the number was doubled and reached to 900 vehicles at the end of 1991. From 1000 in 1993 the graph suddenly raised to 2000 in 1995. Similarly, it was seen that there was even hike of 1000 vehicles per two years. It was now understood that number of vehicles shooted up to 3000 and 4000 by the year 1997 and 1999 respectively.
In conclusion, there was an improvement in the number of vehicles used in china per thousand people but a sudden jump was observed between the years 1993 and 1995.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, similarly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63057324841 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4866392137 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9437103935 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104892873219 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596757359753 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672152929299 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889854297757 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821413481501 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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