Nowadays due to increase of modern technology internet has played a significant role on peoples life. Internet is used everywhere and it has become a part of peoples life. however, internet also have many advantage and also some drawbacks
Firstly, we will discuss about importance and advantage that internet has created on persons life. Internet has made communication much easier. We can talk to the people who are away from us with the help of social media like facebook,tweeter,Instagram. we can share our sorrow and happiness with eachother and maintain a smooth relationship. Moreover, internet has helped us to gain entertainment we are feeling low we can just click to youtube and watch whatever we want.and also internet has made work much easier . for ex we can complete and summit our assignment by sitting in home and also interviews can be held through internet . As we can see it has eventaully made made life easier .
Despite the advantage internet has also some drawbacks. Like nowadays many internet crimes has taken place such a hacking . Internet has also provided many porn sites which are harmfull for childrens as some believe porn has created rape cases and has made childrens to involved on criminal activities . For instance, People put all thier information in social sites like their phone number , name, address which may not be good at some point.
To conclude , internet has provided us a good platform as well as drawbacks. but as the person will be careful of such criminal activities then in that point internet has done many more things to make a persons life much happier
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...oples life. however, internet also have many advantage and also some drawbacks Firstly, we...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... advantage that internet has created on persons life. Internet has made communication m...
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...h the help of social media like facebook,tweeter,Instagram. we can share our sorrow and ...
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... media like facebook,tweeter,Instagram. we can share our sorrow and happiness with...
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... also internet has made work much easier . for ex we can complete and summit our a...
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...so internet has made work much easier . for ex we can complete and summit our assig...
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... interviews can be held through internet . As we can see it has eventaully made ma...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...terviews can be held through internet . As we can see it has eventaully made made ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: made
...ernet . As we can see it has eventaully made made life easier . Despite the advantag...
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... it has eventaully made made life easier . Despite the advantage internet has...
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...et crimes has taken place such a hacking . Internet has also provided many porn si...
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... in social sites like their phone number , name, address which may not be good at ...
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Suggestion: But
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Line 8, column 204, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...net has done many more things to make a persons life much happier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01865671642 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92634429094 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.099396399 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172848494316 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745855630715 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671257387077 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119480188298 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501985934103 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.