It is obvious that crime rate is in increased pace, ant that back to differente reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, education is the first reason, a kid who has a bad education is the most susebtible to be a criminal, either his parents didn’t cheach him the good values, sush as respect others, don’t harm weak persons...etc, those values are important to give a sain and peaceful adult in futur. Or he is raised in a non safe family climat,where there is one or both the parents are drug addicted and they are an abject and abused person thus they make an abnormal person.
Secondly, poverty is a serious cause of crime, in this case it’s starts from stelling to making a crime.and as a compelling exemple, I remember when a was kid a always heard about a famous criminal in my city who has as nickname <the monster>, his story started when he stole a bread from the neighbor store because he was hungry, and after two years in jail he stared his real crimes going to kill people.
In my opinion to face crime, we must trait the causes first, and that by following those points:
Parents must raise their kids in a healthy and safe environement, teach them how be a good element in society, government too, must act in this subject by protecting children from abuse, and establish a good program of citizenship in schools.
Governement must give a special attention to poor cities, it must communicate with the habitat and establish a trusted relationship with them, as well as build an entertainment centers for teanengers and support financially the poor families
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , where
...he is raised in a non safe family climat,where there is one or both the parents are dr...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: A_WAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...a compelling exemple, I remember when a was kid a always heard about a famous crimi...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ling exemple, I remember when a was kid a always heard about a famous criminal in...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'bread'.
Suggestion: bread
...nster>, his story started when he stole a bread from the neighbor store because he was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72084805654 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72471387982 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.7090498449 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 222.666666667 106.682146367 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.1666666667 20.7667163134 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148289765189 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677683915424 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495752263581 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760195319373 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443660647457 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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