You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university.
Write a letter to inquire about about a course. In your letter:
- explain which course you are interested in.
- tell what you know about the university
- explain why you should receive the scholarship.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to query about professional curriculum commencing this summer at University of Chicago.
Being a computer professional, I want to pursue Masters in Computers from University of Chicago. Prerequisite of this curriculum is graduation degree from one of the prestigious universities. This course is of two years in total.
By browsing university website, I found that university has well trained and experienced professors for different courses. Moreover, training and placement cell has 100% campus placements last year which I think is a sign of achievement. Apart from that, campus is large with 5 auditorium, hostel accommodation for students, modern and well equipped classrooms and parking space for students' vehicles.
Going through university brochure, I get to know that university also sponsor scholarship for foreign students holding exceptional academic score. I want to draw your attention on my academics and professional experience of 2 years in multinational product based company Ciena. Being a gold medalist and with consistent CGPA of 4.5/5 in my graduation, I hope that your university will consider my name for scholarship program.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ell
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-04-02 | VIJAYENDRA THAKUR | view | |
| 2018-10-04 | Ell | 90 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m University of Chicago. Prerequisite of this curriculum is graduation degree fro...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'auditorium' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'auditoria', 'auditoriums'.
Suggestion: auditoria; auditoriums
...Apart from that, campus is large with 5 auditorium, hostel accommodation for students, mod...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25876104211 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2661113123 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162304316088 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532270771684 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375168516235 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844569059231 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035860734485 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 8.71597938144 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.