You are interested in attending a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college administration.
In the letter, you should tell:
what course you would like to attend
give details about your educational background and work experience
what reasons make you choose this college.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for master degree in computers in fall 2019 at your prestigious college in US.
I wish to study this course in the upcoming batch of 2019. Nowadays there is a bright future in IT field and engineers earn telephone figure salaries by opting careers in computers. Moreover, I would like to know the fee structure or any scholarship offered by college for the scholars.
As per prerequisites for this course I am eligible candidate to apply for this and I hold a bachelor degree in computers with 10 CGPA. Additionally, I have 4 years of working experience in Information Technology and Networking domain, which would be beneficial for me while studying this course.
Your college is equipped with well infrastructure and skilled faculty members and campus placement rate is higher than everywhere else. Another convincing factor to apply at your college is the 16 months duration of this course, which is almost 2 years at other places. For aforementioned reasons, I prioritize this college to study this course.
It would be my honour to be graduated from your college If I get admission at your college. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mandeep Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99029126214 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89642747371 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3216236446 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177788271819 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672689829398 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388872520544 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10396370984 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429708932711 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.