In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of the crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
The crimes are a part and parcel of any community although the extent and frequency may differ. There will be hardly a country on the earth wherein the illegal practices in various forms are not prevalent. Many such acts are motivated by the greed, enmity and other innumerous reasons.
As the world is progressing, the forms of unauthorized actions are rapidly transforming, and many countries are experiencing a sharp increase in the reported crimes. Furthermore, the reasons behind these malpractices are also evolving and mainly related to the society. The foremost cause of a prohibited action is the greed, as often time, the people want to opt a short route to get money and without the hassle of the earning. As a result, the criminals get to involve themselves in robberies, theft and dacoity which sometimes prompt them to do murders, if any restraint is shown. The solution could be effective legislation and empowering the just system to make such miscreants as an example. On the other hand, CCTV, and an independent Police force can also help in reducing such instances.
The other common crime in the modern societies is stealing of personal details like credit card and bank account information to deprive the people of their valuable savings and this ill-gotten money is utilized in funding terrorism or unrest etc. The law enforcement agencies and financial institutions can take extra security measures to safeguard this data.
Drugs are another source of agony and restlessness of many countries’ administration as the drug peddlers are ruining the societies. The drug addict can go to any extent in fulfilling his/her desire and extraordinary efforts are required to get rid of such an addiction. Many countries have very stringent rules for such crimes and the preparator could get a capital punishment. For example, if someone is caught in the Middle Eastern countries for smuggling drugs, the prosecution expedites the proceeding against the accused and get him executed as a result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18960244648 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91623848064 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60244648318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4921679356 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113162324377 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334238324906 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245733962062 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616516301626 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00750155815607 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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