While recent breakthroughs in technology, particularly having access to the web network have changed the people`s lifestyle considerably, some people decline its necessity for a contented life which I will discuss in this essay.
On the one hand, those who support this point of view cite various drawbacks to the access of the internet which can lower the quality of life. Foremost among this might be the severe dependency on the internet regarding personal and professional duties, restricting the scope of creativity and lateral thinking which may lead progressively to a less content frame of mind. A further handicap might seem to be more deprivation from an extensive variety of challenges and as well as opportunities involved in a hectic social life. The proof of this could be perhaps social isolation which is tremendously beneficial because it afflicts mental comfort, ability to interact with other people, and thus more health issues such as depression and anxiety.
With regard to the above argument, there are several reasons why some people tend to take up their times with state-of-the-art technology. Firstly, having access to the internet provides a wonderful opportunity to receive a wealth of information which is no longer exclusive to a particular group. This is undoubtedly valuable, since the more books, novels, and movies from the different cultural background are seeking to, the more the complexity and truth of world and life would be discovered. Besides, a second plus point can be a great chance to improve academic achievements. This is where the internet, in fact, can play a useful part to supplement and add to knowledge by distance learning and self-study modules.
All things considered, I personally believe that despite a few negative points such as lack of creativity and isolation, the internet can be judged as an essential part of full life due to its benefits, particularly in education and knowledge source.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, well, while, in fact, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27070063694 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02222587564 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62101910828 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5331928113 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.454545455 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200914274575 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718906736486 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647280723542 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125923877574 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210846381938 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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