The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Submitted by ROHI on Sun, 10/07/2018 - 07:31

The given bar chart illustrates the amount of expenditure on 5 kinds of entertainment such as;cinema,video,music,publishing and television by the following three countries:The US,EUROPE and ASIA over the half decade

Overall,The United states had spent a lot on entertainment.The amount of money spent on publishing by all three countries remained higher throughout the period,Whereas the expenditure on cinemas and videos are preferably on lower level.And moderate fund contribution goes to Television.

On the year 1995,The maximum amount of money 184 billion dollars was spent by United states on entertainment,when compared to Americans the contribution of Asians and Europeans were lesser(67 billion $ and 97 billion $ respectively) . Over the span of 5 years ,Despite of increase in the expenditure on entertainment by all three countries,still Americans used enormous amount on entertainment than the other two countries.The united states has used peak amount of 257 billion dollars on Entertainment on the contrast only 131 billion dollar was spent by Europians and 110 billion dollars by Asians

Hereby I conclude by saying that,considerably there is a significant increase in the amount of money spent on entertainment by all the three countries.But maximum was spent by Americans over the 5 years period than Asians and Europians.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, whereas, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69651741294 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.01614808064 2.65546596893 151% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512437810945 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 22.4926829268 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.100816887 43.030603864 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.666666667 112.824112599 338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.0 22.9334400587 292% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.23603664747 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148066268524 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102516645056 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379550845637 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101021784857 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536785296338 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.9 13.2329268293 294% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.99 61.2550243902 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 6.51609756098 296% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.3012195122 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.06136585366 138% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 11.4329268293 284% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.9970731707 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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