The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph illustrate the amount of co2 produced per person in different four countries (UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal) over a forty-year period from 1967 to 2007.

The CO2 emission per person was ever highest in the UK in a given period. The production began from nearly 11 metric tons in 1967 and slowly decreased up to nearly 9 metric tons in the final year 2007 which was again ranked first among other countries. Besides this, CO2 emitted per person in Sweden began from just below 9 metric tons, rose gradually for a decade. Since after there was a significant decrease in CO2 per person became nearly 5 metric tons.

Furthermore, individuals in Italy and Portugal both produced CO2 in 1967 by 4 and 1 metric tons respectively, however, Italy outnumbered in the emission of CO2 to Sweden after 1987 and Portugal became same as in Sweden in 2007 by approximately 5 metric tons.

Overall, the highest amount of Co2 emitted per person in the UK whereas Italy became second at the end of the given period. In other hands, Sweden and Portugal had opposite trend initially but finally became the same emission of CO2 per person.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tric tons, rose gradually for a decade. Since after there was a significant decrease ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78787878788 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51561798441 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2941000469 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.23603664747 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260332426211 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139614297845 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594658087553 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191385677601 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310205921153 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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