The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant.

The first map shows the present view and the second map illustrate the future plans of the university sports centre.

According to the present view, there is a pool 25 m in the middle of the sports centre which is surrounded by a gym on the northern side, a changing room in the east. There is a reception in the in front of the entrance in the south of the sports centre. Furthermore, there are two rectangular blocks of outdoor courts on the west and east of the sports centre.

In the future map, there will be added many constructions in the sports centre. From future plan figure, the area of the gym will increase and it joined with new buildings of a dance studio in the east. The outdoor courts on the east will be totally changed into sports hall attaching with seating. It can be observed on the second map, an extra changing room will be constructed on right and left corner of the entrance for people in the gym, dance studio and swimming. Also, a cafe and sports shop will be made on the left and right side of entrance respectively. Instead of an outdoor court on the west of the sports centre will be changed totally into a leisure pool with a rising area.

Overall, there will be added the new area for leisure pool. sports hall and dance studio and their respective changing rooms with a cafe and sports shop in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sports
...be added the new area for leisure pool. sports hall and dance studio and their respect...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4435483871 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3411416721 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415322580645 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3940015502 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124092923889 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586901601715 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245628213543 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885817054324 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213211596098 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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