The rate of crime surges with each passing year. The essay highlights innumerable reasons behind it and possible solutions that could be adopted to keep a check on such activities.
The first and foremost aspect can be that people indulge in criminal activities as they do not get sufficient punishment for the crime committed. The government should impose strict punishment depending on the gravity of crime. For instance, in case of a heinous crimes like rape and murder, there should be capital punishment whereas for minor crimes like snatching and theft, there should be some years of imprisonment. At the same time criminals inside the prison should be given moral and ethical motivation through various seminars so that they do not commit the crime when they come out of the jail.
Secondly, unemployment plays a major role in the increase of crime as people get involved in such activities in order to earn a living for themselves and their families as they find it easy to earn money. There should be ample employment opportunities so that they do not indulge in crime for their living. Even the lesser qualified people should be encouraged to be self employed by giving various initiatives for starting up their own small business. This will keep the youth busy in their lives, giving no time for thinking of crime.
To recapitulate, strict implementation of punishment supported with moral rehabilitation efforts apart from the initiatives to work opportunities, can ti a great extent, play a pivotal role in eradicating crime from the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...highlights innumerable reasons behind it and possible solutions that could be ado...
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...to keep a check on such activities. The first and foremost aspect can be that p...
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...ent punishment for the crime committed. The government should impose strict punishm...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'crime'?
Suggestion: crime
...ime. For instance, in case of a heinous crimes like rape and murder, there should be c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, apart from, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11284046693 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83566034341 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0422827703 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244440031795 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105401965158 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411923393003 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144335337045 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433628041933 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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