This line graph shows the percentage of women who were employed in four countries from 1985 to 2005.
This chart shows the percentage of women being employed in four countries over an interval of twenty years. As it was displayed in the chart, there was a lot of changes in the percentage of women who was employed in the USA, Korea, Afghanistan and France from 1985 to 2005. In the United State, the percentage of women being employed increased steadily from 1985 to 2000, but then slightly decreased until 2005.In Korea, there was an uptrend in twenty years in the employment percentage of women. The percentage of employment for women in Afghanistan was increased slowly in the first ten years but then fell rapidly after that. There was a slight downtrend in France's percentage of employed women but then recovered and increased continuously until 2005. According to the chart, all countries have a rise in the percentage of women who was employed after 20 years, except for Afghanistan. Among the other, the United State and France are the two countries which have over 50% of employing women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 412, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... but then slightly decreased until 2005.In Korea, there was an uptrend in twenty y...
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Line 1, column 841, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rise in the percentage of women who was employed after 20 years, except for Afgh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, then, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89940828402 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63037552253 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473372781065 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5874490559 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389069304764 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209136078865 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747352560396 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.389069304764 0.15604864568 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.