Dear Thomas,
I feel immense joy in writing to you after a long time. Hope you're doing great. I have planned to apply for a Master's degree in Mechanical Engineering at the University of Toronto for the next fall intake.
After completing our Bachelor's degree, I've joined an automotive company and have been working as a consultant for the past two years. However, I was not able to move further in my career and I did not receive the perks and salary appraisal, I have been expecting for the past two months. So, I decided to pursue higher studies, which would add more value to my profile.
I need your assistance to contact the University admission office directly to inquire some key details. Can you suggest some viable ways to get in touch with the staff? Or it would be great, if you ask them about the crucial information such as fees, scholarships, career paths and, not to mention, co-curricular activities. Also, update me if there are any announcements from the University regarding courses.
I wish I would meet you soon there.
Warm wishes
Prasanth G
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
... writing to you after a long time. Hope youre doing great. I have planned to apply fo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... After completing our Bachelors degree, Ive joined an automotive company and have b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82258064516 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69959401375 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9613259739 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.75 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271755745307 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812959690273 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543848158416 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162081747615 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535780436687 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.