Recently, the phenomenon of computer technologies and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the effects of the computer on society cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the computer's affection can be destructive and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree with the negative impacts of computer technology. At first, the speed of works became faster, after the advent of computer technology. However, this computer brought many disadvantages for the human by making digital data. For example, the digital data such as customer information could be stolen by a flash memory only.
In addition, it made the process of works more accurate and reliable. But, the data of many organizations endangered by the computer facilities like the Internet. For instance, a recent research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that the computer systems of a significant number of organizations such as banking and airports attacked by the hacker through the Internet annually.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of the computer on the communities far outweighed its benefits.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46296296296 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11142800414 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606481481481 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3023498156 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230717661541 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836892366872 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740429689788 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126220224072 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418583461647 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.