The bar chart compares male and female drivers in terms of car trips by eight different purposes in 2005.
Overall, it is apparent from the given figure that the main purpose of driving was work for everyone, while the least indication was visiting friends by 2005. Moreover, in the most occasions, percentage of women trips higher than men, except work, going to countryside and amusement.
Regarding the women, almost 40% of reason why they drive cars was going to work, being less than men rates by approximately 10%. The second highest was shopping as opposed to almost doubled of men. Courses, bank, meeting friends and running errands similarly accounted for around 10%, whereas visiting towns and recreation were under 5%. The second highest
Half of the objection to drive car was work for men and travelling towns and leisure time were under and over 10% respectively. Similarly, shopping and courses consisted of around 10%, while bank, running errands and hanging out with friends were composed of nearly 5%.
- The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern life.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005. 78
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes being committed each year While some think that the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent many people believe that other measures will be needed Discuss the both views 73
- the pie chart show the electricity generated in Germany and france from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...eation were under 5%. The second highest Half of the objection to drive car was w...
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Suggestion:
...ith friends were composed of nearly 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, second, similarly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44768824017 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8281568506 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131525045049 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667472939704 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106309542637 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116717160417 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130160034257 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.