After the Renaissance evolution, the lifestyle of many people started to change dramatically. Many new inventions entered people's lives. Among them, cars had more effect on the lifestyle because it makes transportation easier. Hence, people in different cities and countries linked to each other and the products transported easily to different regions. Because of these advantages, people were enthusiastic to buy a car; hence, the number of cars increase rapidly. In my view, this increase is going to be faster than past and in the next twenty years, there will be more cars in use than now. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
First and foremost, there are many companies that produce cars. These companies are eager to sell more cars, hence, they compete with each other for producing better cars and advertising them more and more. Therefore, people are going to be motivated to buy more cars. In my view, this competition will be more intensive in the future.
Second, people are going to be lazy more than past and will walk less in the future. Also, the cities are growing quickly, hence, the people will not be able to walk to their cars or using bicycles. Instead, they prefer to use their own cars for going anywhere. For instance, when I was an elementary student, I always walk to school; but, these days many students prefer to use a car for going to schools because at first they are lazy and the distance of their home to school is farther than past. I think this phenomenon will be more extensive in the next twenty year.
Finally, driving a car is an important entertainment for most of the people. In my view, in the next twenty year, each member of a family will have a car because it will be a personal device. Many young people will compel their parents to buy a car for them to have a hobby with their friends. For instance, I know many children that are waiting to be eighteen years old for having their own cars. Hence, in the near future, the number of cars will extremely increase.
To sum up, after twenty years the number of cars in use will be more than now. Because the automobile companies will encourage people to buy more cars, people will be lazier than now, the cities will bigger than now and finally driving a car will be an important hobby.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will be more intensive in the future. Second, people are going to be lazy more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67156862745 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43109580968 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428921568627 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1574772573 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8695652174 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197693666932 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754233982628 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623793809373 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136801997431 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484652040805 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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