Dear Z,
I Cucoo, one of the residents of the Hill Avenue Society is writing this on behalf of my Society to bring your attention towards the increase of disposal garbage and dirty roads in our street. Our society has always been an exemplary in terms of maintaining hygiene and good health.
But from past few months, the littering of garbage on roads has increased due to the insufficient number of trash bins. The lack of trash bins is resulting in overloading of disposables and has lead to the birth of some maggots and invitation to insects. Also, the foul smell in the street is causing air pollution which sadly has started affecting the health of many residents.
We all at our utmost are trying to cut down on our garbage however, the situation still persists. Thereby, I suggest a measure that more trash bins must be provided in the area in order to curb down the air and land pollution and separate trash bins for recyclable and non-recyclable garbage. I am sure this will promise fresh air and clean land again to the society.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Cucoo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77202072539 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55654200126 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9090502469 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134566344648 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495755059572 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523233919212 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754106954869 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377239392089 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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