Huge changes are took place in human's life since many years ago by seeing to this fact more positive changes in life shows greater amount of individuals would be able to arrange the life more easier to live. I agree with the statement which says that life today is more steadily as compared to life which our Ancestors were living. I feel this way for several reasons. First, nowadays the technology is rapidly in progression rather then in the past. Second, in the past limited facilities was available for the people then today life.
To begin with, in the past people experienced more conflicts in their life on contrary to today people, the evidence shows that less people were access to internet. For instances, according to my grandfather whenever they became face to any problem and also whenever they wanted to inform someone about an event, they were always used a piece of paper by forwarded their messages to them or solving problems. On contrary, people in twenty first century have access to different technological tools widely, such as, internet, even they carrying out their multitasks by robots, and the things which made their life more easier.
Second, if i pick up the facilities which is available in today life as a tittle of discussion indeed it would abruptly bring me to remind my grandfather. He was always talking about facilities which was not easy for them to handle the life through such limited tools and things. Furthermore, in the past if people wanted to migrate from one land to another they did do trip by feet rather then cars, trains, boats. On the other hand, people today using different ways for their migration, like, sort of people trips by cars other moves by trains or boats.
To sum up, life today is much better and easy as the life was in past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
Huge changes are took place in humans life since many years a...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...duals would be able to arrange the life more easier to live. I agree with the statement whi...
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Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eel this way for several reasons. First, nowadays the technology is rapidly in pr...
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Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...nology is rapidly in progression rather then in the past. Second, in the past limite...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...o today people, the evidence shows that less people were access to internet. For ins...
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Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...olving problems. On contrary, people in twenty first century have access to different techno...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ms. On contrary, people in twenty first century have access to different technological ...
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Line 2, column 613, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...s, and the things which made their life more easier. Second, if i pick up the facilities w...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ade their life more easier. Second, if i pick up the facilities which is availab...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ilities which is available in today life as a tittle of discussion indeed it woul...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...another they did do trip by feet rather then cars, trains, boats. On the other hand,...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...is much better and easy as the life was in past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, for instance, i feel, sort of, such as, talking about, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74440894569 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38422584132 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.396319897 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153879207445 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062554633824 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054103230167 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107900754046 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395758164606 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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